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August Lore Contest Poll

since @mmf is gone and presumed dead it seems im the only one willing to revive this contest.

Prompt: Bred for war or bred for more?
A faction specific battle pet ponders its existence. Write on their thoughts!

since there was only 4 entries (one from mmf as an “example” and therefore doesnt count) the judges dont really have a phase here

mmf's example

Rex
The struggle is real

Rex wished to be a knight. Armor glinting in the sun, a shield by which to blind his foes, and a sword as magnificent as the great sky above. I wished to be a knight.

I was born, as one of four, in a brood by the northern edge of the Shim’Zar jungle. It was there that I met the knight and there that I was struck down. A knight of hulking proportions and a steadfast gaze that locked his foes in place, his name was Excelcious, Lord of Voiron, recently displaced from his throne by a particularly fussy repulsor beast. In his haste to return home, he accidentally stepped on me and unwittingly brought my hatching goop to the Lyonar Kingdoms were I hatched. It was beautiful.

As I traveled the kingdoms, I stood in the shadows and watched as blacksmiths forged armor as strong as the mightiest colossi, shields as mighty as the great leviathans, and swords. Oh the mighty swords, even stronger than the crushing hammers of the phalanxar. As I stood there, gazing at the wonders of swordsmanship, I knew that it was my destiny to become one of them. And even though I had no arms to wield a sword, I WILL BECOME A KNIGHT.

I somehow found my way back to Maagari. My eyes were wide open to the possibilities that lay before me. No arms? I’ll just make do with the one asset given to us Rex, our maws.

I’ll show them. I’ll train my jaws, chomping all day long! No matter how tired I am or how much my jaws hurt, I’ll keep on training until I’m able to hold a sword as tall and mighty as that of the great Excelcious!

degenerator

Pax

I protect the ones I love, even with my life.

Zirix was an obsessed man. His hatred for the gods blinded him. “Gods are merciless beings that only bring misery and pain. We have no need for them. I shall prove to you, my people that we ourselves can become masters and let none treat us as slaves, be it mortal or god”. Those words marked the begging of a new era, as well as me. I was a failure. A creation made to mock the gods. Cat’s are considered the pets of the gods and my master thought it would be fun to create one for himself. He made me broken. Destined to die. A gear half broken or a screw too lose? It mattered not. “You were not born but you will die”. Ironic how cruel Zirix was to his creations. However, it all changed one day when he created her. The Scioness was kind, too kind for a killing machine. She demanded Zirix to fix me and he agreed. Never had I seen such kindness. If only I had spent more time with her… Four assassins attacked the palace at night, ordered to kill the Scioness. After reaching her room, one held the door behind him shut buying more time for the others to finish their job. The Scioness was strong but had much to learn. She was preoccupied with two of the assassins and had not noticed the third one rushing from behind her, ready to stab her. His blade pierced through and almost broke when it touched the tough metal. Time froze for a second and you could see everyone’s face looking at the back-stabbing assassin. His brothers were disappointed. He missed and I was hit. When did I jump? I didn’t think at the time. I bought just enough time for two Iron dervishes to brake the door. Immediately, the assassins disappeared out of the window leaving me at the floor ready to die. The Scioness was heartbroken and if she had tears she would cry. But I was happy because although I was never born, I died for someone I loved.

mebler92

Rae
Redemption by the winds

Footsteps are left behind for only moment. The winds refuse to let them stay, for it thinks them petty things.

Three bodies stride forward through this wind. I gaze at them. Two cloaked in deep black, with empty faces and large encumbering packs along their backs. I assume them to be sad, for their heads hang low like dried fruit from a bone riddled tree.

The third is a strange sight. She is tall. Taller than others at least. Her eyes are golden and blaze out from her white plastered body like tiny stars. Burning. Searing a golden mark of pride and avarice into her veins.

She walks in front of the others, occasionally glancing at them, whispering sweet limericks. Hidden commands. Hidden words. Hidden noise which fills their heads, fills my head, and pours out our eyes. A ravaged river of silver pain.

I hate her.

Or at least I think I do. The reason for my hatred escapes me, but I know it is my duty to stop her.

I must bring her servants a silent serenity. Silent equality.

And so I shift out to my last battle.

A question seeps into my chest. A simple one, with many answers.

Is the equality they force me to bring truly perfection, or is imperfection true equality? I do not know, so I go on to clean the slate anew in my death.

The only force that drives me, the hope for redemption in my passing.

oranos

Gor

there is no difference between life and death

Sarlac’s Log Vol.3

Log 1

I have gathering the necessary regents from the Lyonar kingdoms and the test subjects from the Magaari beast lands. My quest for immortality brings me to Styxus, home of the magics and rituals capable of resurrecting the dead.

Log 28

Test subjects 58 - 63 will be subjected to the R-Series formula. The powdered golem cores should provide a lasting energy source to keep the ritual magic in priestess blood active.

Log 31

Experiment 60-R is a success. Unlike the other R series experiments, the serum has stabilized instead of killing the host. 60-R has lost its fur and changed skin pigment to a wraithling purple and seems to have gained a heightened sense of pain. Further refinement is necessary. Perhaps a higher ratio of sundrop elixir would counteract the side effects.

Log 59

I wish i could gather more, but the clergy is getting suspicious. If any more Priestesses are found dead I will be forced to flee. I must reuse previous experiments to conserve materials.

Log 62

Experiments 37-P, 51-S, 60-R, 77-T and 82-V have survived the refined X series elixir with varying degrees of disfigurement. They have grown what appears to be blood red golem cores and rigid spikes over random areas of the body. Only experiment 60-R has grown a sky blue core over what used to be its face.

Log 64

SUCCESS! While removing the glowing cores from experiment 60-R, once its body was fatally damaged, it disappeared in a flash of purple smoke along with the solid pieces of its body I removed and reappeared in the corner of the room. repeated attempts and previous observations show it considers corners to be “safe spaces”.

Log 66

I have analyzed the smoke released when experiment 60-R vanishes and it appears to be an extremely powerful and fast acting poison. Despite how quickly it disperses from both the air and the subjects bloodstream it would be enough to kill even the hardiest subjects. It seems experiment 60-R’s lack of need or capability to breath is the reason for its survival. Further testing will require adequate bodily protection. Perhaps a modified sandshield would do.

Log 67

The last remaining experiment, 60-R, has escaped. 60-R is not worth chasing as I already have all the necessary data and my ship to Vetruvia will not wait. Unfortunately this means I will have to do any further testing on myself. I hope letting it run free won’t come back to haunt me.

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  • oranos

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##Prizing
1st- 3 Spirit Orbs +Loremaster title + place in jury for next Lore contest
2nd- 2 Spirit Orbs + place in jury for next Lore contest
3rd- 1 Spirit Orb + place in jury for next Lore contest

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Come on, he was here last week

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clue #1: he disappeared the exact day i sent him a private message about this contest

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I also sent a PM to him.

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clue #2: it was isbee’s fault

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Oh yeah?! Well, maybe…

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Oh God, sorry guys. I was busy with my little brother’s funeral services (R.I.P Marco Luna December 31, 2004 - August 23, 2012) and came down with a pretty severe cold nearing the end of it (just a bad cough now, no more dillusional sweats thank God). Tack on some poor time management in regards to college on my part and WABLAMO!

Anyways, thanks @oranos, @isbee, and all others who’ve been patient with the contest these past few days. As the “host” you have my most sincere apologies for being so lax with the administration of the event. I hope that this doesn’t spoil your view of the Lore Contest as a whole and I hope to continue working with the wonderful community we have here!

Ci dispiace per l’inconvenienza et je voudrais un bien jour pour tout suite!

-MMF

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If there is a reason to not have to apologize.

This is a pretty damn good one.
I know what it’s like to lose a little sibling, though I’m positive yours hurt more.

Seriously, don’t worry about it, all is forgiven, we’re just glad to know you’re okay.

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I have no better words to give than anyone else…but to you I say (for whatever comfort it can provide)…I am deeply sorry for your loss.

We may never meet in this life, and realistically we have no idea how long this forum will be around; regardless, I consider you a friend. If there were any way to help you more, I would gladly do so.

Please…take all the time you need to be with the ones you love. Nothing is more important.

I can’t speak for everyone, but I will be around here as long as I am able, if you want to talk.

Again, deepest sympathies to you and your family.

-Isbee

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I don’t see a need to apologize dear friend.
All I can say is that I’m sorry for your loss. I have no idea how bad it can feel to lose someone so close to you, so all I can say is that.
If you ever need any help we’re all right behind you, so I think we would all help you as much as possible.

-Fusion

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There’s only 3 more days 'till the poll closes and the numbers tallied up! Make sure to get all of your votes in before the 7th (of September) to vote for who you tink should win!

btw:

[spoiler] Thank you all for your kind words of support. It means a lot to me to know that people care. Nevertheless, I’m not the one you should be worrying about. It’s your friends, family, and all of your loved ones that you should be with right now.

Take the time to say you love them, to console them when times are tough, to be there with them when things get scary. For no matter who you are or where you may be, if you don’t take the time to appreciate them now… They might not be there to smell the roses when you do. [/spoiler]

P.S: Is it just me or are some of the chat functions not working?

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You have to have the spoiler tags next to what you are saying.

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It’s just you o.o

you need a [/spoiler] at the end of your spoiler

Mmf does >.>
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its almost closing time. (i really hope this tie will be broken in my favor)

@mmf would you like to do the honors?

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Will do @oranos (just be sure to close it :wink: )

Congratulations and MANY thanks to @oranos, @mebler92, and @degenerator for participating in this times Duelyst Lore Contest! Your submissions are what keep this train going and without them I seriously doubt that we’d still be having them.

Anyways, onto the wieners:

Congrats to @oranos for winning first place! on his beautiful rendition of Gor. Simple yet elegant, the piece brought to the lore contest a new style of writing in it’s approach to this (last) month’s prompt! The journals/logs did a lot to bring us closer to the scene and the fresh style seemed to garner much appreciation from the community!

Coming in second is the egdy egg sister himself, @degenerator! The rationale on Pax’s in-game effect and connection to Vetruvia makes a lot of sense and brought to my face an “Oh, shit! That makes a lot of sense!” moment (though she makes more sense synergieed with Zirix, the characterization is on point :ok_hand: )

And coming in 3rd is @mebler92 with a worthy edition of Vetruvian Lore/Characterization! The take of Rae bringing a ray of hope to a Vetruvia bereft with strife, inequality, and slavery takes my breath away! Makes you wonder why the brave little martyr always targets the wraithling rather than the BM behind it :rage:

Anyways, expect your rewards soon!

Thanks for participating and for all of those who didn’t make it (i know of a certain @galaxydueler who tried to reserve ace) don’t worry. I have something eggstra special planned for next time :wink:!

I’ll also be creating a Poll(s) Post regarding future Lore Contests as well so look forward to that!
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I’m just gonna leave this here… @ThanatosNoa

@oranos 's entry reminds me of those SCP stories I used to read. :+1:

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